literature

Faded Memories of You

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Think back to the days,
The days that we remained,
Tight in each other's arms.
"Together forever 'til we fall apart".

Back over the times,
The times that we stayed,
Under the blanket.
"Here with you, I will always be safe".

Through the moments,
The moments in which we kissed,
Like nobody else would love you more.
"I promise, only you I shall adore".

The secrets you told,
The love that we hold,
It all starts to crash down.
"Together forever 'til we fall apart".

I wander alone,
Setting myself to the danger,
Of this world.
"Here with you, I will always be safe".

Time to let go,
Leaving only memories to remain.
You and me, now alone.
"I promise, only you I shall adore".
I honestly don't even know how I came up with this haha. I just sorta threw it together, but it doesn't sound all that bad.
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thecrazymagnet's avatar
The repetition really ties this together. The one thing I would change would be those two places where you have end rhymes - they sort of throw me off. Other than that, this is such a moving poem! I especially love the contrast of stanzas 2 vs 5 - you played that so well. Wonderful work :)